Otro Slab entintado

Ok, now the fourth try. What can I say about it? There they are, these weird friggin' straight bits of lines that I'm positive I didn't drew like that.
Vectors are strange, they have a life of their own and sometimes they don't obey. Maybe it's my tablet, maybe it's me, maybe it's the settings on the brush, I don't know what it may be yet, but I will do it better every time, hopefully.

I will conquer you, dirty rotten digital ink!!

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Here's the third go at this one.
This one looks crappy, and I swear that it didn't seem that bad while I was working on it, I think I've to relax a little, focus more. Some of the lines look like if they had been broken.
I'm ashamed of myself, I promise to do better the next time. My honor is at stake, even though it never had too much value, I've got to save what little I have left...

Have you ever been kicked in the forehead by a mule? It looks like Slab here knows how it feels...

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Here's my second try on this one, improving what I thought that was looking odd. Is it ok? I guess I'll have to wait for mr. K's verdict.

Open GL version

Render View capture (I don't know how to export a rendered image)

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Here's another Slab I inked, trying to improve enough to appeal to mr. John K.

This one overall looks better than the one I did before and it took less time, so, for me, there is an improvement in some way. I think that still there's something not quite right on the consistency of some lines like on the stomach. At least it's not awful enough to make me puke.

Entintando a Slab

Trying the inks on John K's Slab. Are they any good or sucks balls? Maybe they're good sucking balls...

On a second look:
The hand up above doesn't look good, now that I look at it... the curve of the chest isn't that great either and I missed a wrinkle on the cheek.
Maybe the variation on the thick and thin should be greater.

Acá van a ir publicadas mis prácticas non sanctas, mi entrenamiento como artista gráfico. Sin respeto a nada que no sea divertido.